10A – Elevator Pitch No. 1

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  1. Hello Arlene,
    I loved your elevator pitch! It was engaging, informative and even funny! I hadn't heard of your product before but after hearing your proposal, I think it is a great idea. I lose socks all the time and it is really frustrating! I like how you hooked your audience at the beginning with an interesting quote and later went into detail into how your product worked. Great job!

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  2. Hey Arlene, I think your elevator pitch was wonderful and your idea is interesting. You included quotes and some comedy to keep the audience engaged. Concerning possible improvements speaking a bit faster and more vigorously may hook the audience better, but those suggestions come with more practice. Also do you know why socks disappear in the washer and dryer? I am interested to know why, good stuff none the less.

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  3. Hey Arlene,
    I loved your introduction! "Death, Taxes, and Losing Socks." That has me hooked! I would just encourage you to be a little more energetic when talking about the sock catcher. This is an idea that most people who do laundry can use! This is definitely a very cool and interesting idea! Great job!

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